sign your stories, in fact, format the page like youre going to submit it for publication wouldnt hurt either..
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hey, yaw. hopefully i'll catch a few eyes here
im going through several workshopsubmissions, trying to print pages (i cant for critique read manuscripts off the screen)
there are a number of submissions that don't have names attached to them. literally, i have no idea whose stories some of them are..
if there is a fluke and submissions go through without names, which seems to be happening, please at least sign the pages you submit. give it a header, name and title (and even approx wordcount, which some of us started doing later on and is a nice addition)
here's an example of how to format your pages for workshopping:
http://chuckpalahniuk.net/workshop/read?type=t&id=437
hopefully that link ^^^^ will work for everyone
if not, i'll quickly write out an example:[/font]
[font=tahoma]Family L O V E
by johnathan.n.kabol
Approx. 200 words
HE WALKS FROM THE BAR, beer in hand. He chooses a table at the center of the room and sits in a chair. He looks up. The room bathes in the dry light of fluorescent bulbs. A warmth to the air and breathing is filtered through the smell of too many bodies.
Melissa appears as a flash at the entrance, and they must have caught eyes because she heads directly toward him. He doesn't stand. She touches his arm.
William, what're you doin here?
He offers no answer and she asks what he wants to do tonight.
I don't care, Melissa. He leers at her chest and chews his bottom lip. As long as I end up sucking on you, I really don't care how we get there.
Her pink lips thin, widened into a smile, she stares at him, her eyes like grey diamonds in the light.
She looks down at his zipper, says it's time to leave. When they were kids, their father taught them how to care for their own. A woman's fine and important, he'd say, but there's nothing quite like kin. Their father was all about safety and understanding. She adores having an older brother, but on some days, a lover is just more important.
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[font=courier]this is an example of a formatted submission, so when we read each others stories, we know who wrote it and it's clean and easy on the eyes. the word count lets us know immediately what we're in for, we know who to contact:
also:
if you submit under a different name than you go by via the cult, put your pen-name/by-line under your "submitting" name
the point being, that i others can contact you with questions about a submission
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kabol[/font]
At dawn I jumped the gate. I ran, ran from the hate. I know they got whips and chains, shackles for my hands and feet. String me, spit cut and salt me. Proof i'm not worth the price of a mule. Fuck forty acres, i just wanna provide my family with food. -Young Anera
JKab,
Check to see if the critique thing is working before you put all your time and effort into doing well-thought out critiques. I recently submitted a story, got two reviews, and neither the star rating or the feedback showed up after the workshoppers reviewed the story. I know this because I PM'd one of the workshoppers the other day to see if they left feedback to the review, and they did, a glitch just didn't retain the whole critique. Long story short, see if your review will retain star ratings and typed feedback before you spend tons of time doing them. P.S. "Mating Calls" by Fortune Wookie. Ooops. Forgot. Still used to the old workshop.
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yeah.. i've been noticing some of that. among other things. i cant even locate reviews crafted by members right now (it used to be so easy, right there), so i cant read eyeslikeholes reviews to see how he prefers reviews written for his work. ive toyed with the notion to review works and then PM-ing the authors individually, but without the tools stated above--that i cant find the authors names a lot of the time and i cant locate their reviews written--it seems tedious and unfare and the thought leaves me with a gunmetal aftertaste
i just dont know. for instance, i have a hard copy of [i]The Letter[/i], which i've scrached all over and put time into, but i think the stories will be best served with the time spent waiting for the workshop to regain its merits
this place was fucking amazing and it will be again soon. we have the deadline and poluma (tech admin badass) has confirmed that timeline, so maybe it's just best to wait it out until then. read the essays, practice the techniques, read the books suggested, and everything will work out. seriously, there is nothing like this place anywhere on the web
wook, i look forward to reading and reviewing your new babies
thanks for the heads up and we'll play together soon. just like old times, but in an advanced new color and with easier navation, all that
-kabol
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At dawn I jumped the gate. I ran, ran from the hate. I know they got whips and chains, shackles for my hands and feet. String me, spit cut and salt me. Proof i'm not worth the price of a mule. Fuck forty acres, i just wanna provide my family with food. -Young Anera






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