Alojzy
This was great advice.
I am not that great of a reviewer, when I review I usually tell the author how I felt about it.
This is good advice, it will be much longer before I can write a review.....but at least its helpful.
Question#1-Why spend the time to write these thought provoking reviews when they might just vanish anyway?
Question#2-Has the bug been fixed yet?
Snikt!
"This is pulp at it's best. It takes no prisoners."---Terroja
[url=http://www.chuckpalahniuk.net/fan/workshop/view.php?id=1370]Read "Tex" in the Writers Workshop[/url]
"It reminded me of an R-rated Ferris Bueller."---snapdrgn16
[url=http://www.chuckpalahniuk.net/fan/cw/view.php?id=61]Read "Dinner With Parents" in Chuck's Workshop.[/url]
[url=http://www.chuckpalahniuk.net/fan/workshop/view.php?id=1642][I]The Guts Virus[/I] is now in the Writers Workshop![/url]
Answer#1- a) What you will learn from taking your review writing to a higher level, will stay with you, even if a review does get deleted for some mysterious reason. b) the author may get to read your review before it vanishes. c) one of the first responses to that situation, besides the debugging code, was a "carbon copy" mechanism, so that the review would be saved and could be added back to the submission from the backup file. d) If you follow out my experiment for optimum review writing, you will have your own back-up copy of any review you write by that method.
Answer#2-I haven't heard anymore about it. Chances are, if it were a persistent, pervasive and unsolved problem, you would see many more people talking on that thread with Lippy and Kareem. I don't see it as a great worry.
VP - Workshop Dog
Wonderful advice Vig. I think you've covered just about everything. The only thing I can think to add is that it's helpful if you reply to the people who review your stuff. Any dialogue is good dialogue, right?
And the Alex Cassun Special is 900 words, but who really wants to get technical here? Not I.
:)
Oh, also: be specific. It doesn't help the author much if you say "there were a lot of spelling errors and tense changes." But if you say "a couple time, you wrote 'there' instead of 'their'." This way, the author will know what to look for.
Thanks Vig.
"This is pulp at it's best. It takes no prisoners."---Terroja
[url=http://www.chuckpalahniuk.net/fan/workshop/view.php?id=1370]Read "Tex" in the Writers Workshop[/url]
"It reminded me of an R-rated Ferris Bueller."---snapdrgn16
[url=http://www.chuckpalahniuk.net/fan/cw/view.php?id=61]Read "Dinner With Parents" in Chuck's Workshop.[/url]
[url=http://www.chuckpalahniuk.net/fan/workshop/view.php?id=1642][I]The Guts Virus[/I] is now in the Writers Workshop![/url]
Great advice, everyone. I appreciate it, as I think everyone else does.
I'm getting better at reviewing, but it is difficult sometimes. I don't mean that to be like, "I'm here for me and no one else" it just comes down to laziness. I constantly say I want to be a writer, but I spend most of my time doing anything to avoid actually writing. I hate that. So, when I see someone complete something, I automatically have some respect for the completion.
I took a class where one chapter was dedicated completely to revising and reviewing. Man, that was the hardest chapter in the entire class. To go through pieces, line by line, and pick things apart some difficult shit. In the end, though, it really does help everyone to improve. Like many have mentioned, nothing sucks worse than putting tons of effort into something then getting "This sucks" as a review.
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Yes, excellent advice. I have been most remiss, although trying to improve. I will just need to eliminate the pieces I either do not feel qualified to review at all, do not understand, or feel overwhelmed by (but I will work on that one). Reading past reviews by dedicated reviewers has also been very helpful. Now if I can just get past simply feeling inadeqate.
Really great advice, not only for the Writer's Workshop here at the Cult, but for other writing workshops that you might attend.
I've been trying to follow the advice in this thread and the other linked threads to the best of my ability.
I don't normally try to mention each and every grammatical/spelling mistake I see, however. Does anyone think that would be helpful?
Trying to be a better reviewer,
Asgenar
-Asgenar
[I]Gertrude Stein said it best, "To write is to write is to write" you have to do it to do it.[/I]
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I try to only correct 1.) spelling errors that a normal spell checker program wouldn't get, like the names of prescription drugs and 2.) homonyms.
Examples:
1.) It's spelled "Vicodin" not "Vicadin"
2.)"Semen" is the stuff that comes out of a dick, "seamen" means sailors.
wow, thanks. I haven't reviewed anything yet. Mostly because I really didn't know how (format wise that is). I have been meaning to though, so this should definately help. Thanks again.
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I'm taking a poetry and upper level writing class this semester. It gets hard but I'm finding that I actually like the sometimes brutal truth. Sure, I get depressed for a few days but after that I'm filled with excitement about what I can potentially create. And by brutal, I don't mean "this sucks." I've gotten a lot of in-depth feedback from close friends in the past few weeks. They've told me when (and why) my writing is boring, when it's unclear, where I should tweek a sentence, and everything else that hurts but is helpful.
Yesterday I reviewed for the first time. It wasn't very long but it felt good to say things honestly and know I might be helping someone. Of course it's easier to assess complete strangers but I agree with Asgenar that this advice should be used in all of our workshops. Thanks for being here.
Here's a question for all you experienced reviewers.
Do you guys consider two or three stars to be the "no real problems, no real stand outs" level?
It seems like the ratings are all over the place. If anything there seems to be a tendency of low balling people on the stars.
I've seen something like "good work, sweet cheeks. Two stars from your daddy!" and then "Uhh. Stop typing forever please. Three stars." (these are of course only fictional examples). Do the stars really make or break a piece?
[QUOTE=chad lott;1083760]Here's a question for all you experienced reviewers.
Do you guys consider two or three stars to be the "no real problems, no real stand outs" level?
It seems like the ratings are all over the place. If anything there seems to be a tendency of low balling people on the stars.
I've seen something like "good work, sweet cheeks. Two stars from your daddy!" and then "Uhh. Stop typing forever please. Three stars." (these are of course only fictional examples). Do the stars really make or break a piece?[/QUOTE]
I consider 3 stars to be in with the 'no real problems no real stand outs' It's an average score, but I know what you mean. I've seen people say that someone's Characters are excellent and give it a two star rating. Or when There is little dialogue in a story that doesn't call for dialogue much at all get a two or one star rating. If there's not much to review on a particular aspect I think it should be left blank. If there SHOULD be more dialogue then yes, a two rating may be accurate. Same can be said on plot. If the short piece is more of a character study (like many modern things tend to be) The plot is going to be a side aspect, if it's there at all. Just because it's not what you wanted it to be doesn't mean it's any good.
So yeah, what I'm trying to say is that star rating isn't mainly what you should look at it's the review itself. There are of course many exceptions but it does happen.
I think the advantage of star rating (used correctly) is as follows:
Plot, dialogue, character, style etc. are exclusively to help the author see where he needs work.
The overall rating is for both the writer and other viewers. A higher rating naturally catches other peoples attention, while a lower one can discourage people who are looking for an easy review. Not really fair but if the anthology project starts up again It'll help. Plus if you're not looking to review and just wanna check out a thing or two for the fun of it then you can grab something that's more polished and thus a more enjoyable read.
Hope this helps
-j
I don't want to be the one she tells her deep dark secrets to.
I want to [b]be[/b] her deep dark secret
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The star rating was initially and crudely used as a way to easily search out the best stories the workshop had to offer. I remember when working on the anthology, the first place we filtered through were the five star stories. The story of mine at the time that was most liked by the agent was an insignificant little 2500 words barely holding a notice with its two star rating, but she gave it thumbs up for revision--as opposed to rejection. the point is, that wasnt a five star story but it stood out more so than a two star story would. the point is.. the whole star rating system is extremely subjective, but the basic rules should apply to everyone:
1star = very poor, as in the author obviously should have spent some real time with the story
2stars = easy to fix problems that need be addressed, but the grammar and spelling was correct and the story coherent
3stars = average story, no real problems but also forgettable
4stars = superior story, only a few things holding it back
5stars = virtually flawless, the story sticks out and has a point and it's ready for publication somewhere
pretty much like that is how i rate stories
also, i seldom provide any other ratings than the overall
i figure that if i have an opinion about dialogue or plot, that those opinions will be written out in the actual review, so the overall is the only rating that is ever important to me
stars have never grafted any particular help to my improving
only the reviews themselves have been helpful
kabol
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At dawn I jumped the gate. I ran, ran from the hate. I know they got whips and chains, shackles for my hands and feet. String me, spit cut and salt me. Proof i'm not worth the price of a mule. Fuck forty acres, i just wanna provide my family with food. -Young Anera
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[QUOTE=JCarlson;1083776]
The overall rating is for both the writer and other viewers. A higher rating naturally catches other peoples attention, while a lower one can discourage people who are looking for an easy review. Not really fair but if the anthology project starts up again It'll help. Plus if you're not looking to review and just wanna check out a thing or two for the fun of it then you can grab something that's more polished and thus a more enjoyable read.
Hope this helps
-j[/QUOTE]
random, but this thought occurred to me while reading your response...
being a workshop, i agree, it's very important to read what others write of the story, just like you were at a table and heard what others have said. you can agree or disagree with other members' points before beginning on your ideas. so if i have a story and someone confronts the dialogue as being cliché or "too whiney", and then four other people agree with the assessment, then it would be in my best interest to take a stern leer at my dialogue
if several people in glee point out the same character description, then i would know i got that pretty close to perfect
i think the reviews are far more important than the star ratings, but i also agree that when i look for an old story to read recreationally, i usually pull the five and four stars stories, and very seldom pull from the two and ones.
kabol
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At dawn I jumped the gate. I ran, ran from the hate. I know they got whips and chains, shackles for my hands and feet. String me, spit cut and salt me. Proof i'm not worth the price of a mule. Fuck forty acres, i just wanna provide my family with food. -Young Anera
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[QUOTE=Destini;508985]I'm taking a poetry and upper level writing class this semester. It gets hard but I'm finding that I actually like the sometimes brutal truth. Sure, I get depressed for a few days but after that I'm filled with excitement about what I can potentially create. And by brutal, I don't mean "this sucks." I've gotten a lot of in-depth feedback from close friends in the past few weeks. They've told me when (and why) my writing is boring, when it's unclear, where I should tweek a sentence, and everything else that hurts but is helpful.
Yesterday I reviewed for the first time. It wasn't very long but it felt good to say things honestly and know I might be helping someone. Of course it's easier to assess complete strangers but I agree with Asgenar that this advice should be used in all of our workshops. Thanks for being here.[/QUOTE]
hey, dest.. blah blah blah blah blah blah blah ..im glad youre here
kabol
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* edit * nevermind . i meant, I [i]was[/i] glad she [i]was[/i] here.
i just noticed that post is three years old this month
At dawn I jumped the gate. I ran, ran from the hate. I know they got whips and chains, shackles for my hands and feet. String me, spit cut and salt me. Proof i'm not worth the price of a mule. Fuck forty acres, i just wanna provide my family with food. -Young Anera
oh. this pisses me off. [i]reviewing quick tips[/i] is a vital fucking thread, and this is supposed to be a "closed" thread. what other vitals will be fucking decimated? plus having a lot our intellectual property available to the naked internet threatens my nerves more than just a trivial little. perhaps we should close the site down for the final fixing, bring it back up once it's secure again. i'll miss the place, but that's better than one day coming and seeing it changed to an asian b.aby p orn site in which all or most of our stories and reviews are fucking gone. i dont think i'd sue over that or anything, but i do take my work here seriously and just having everything open to the world bothers me immensely. stupidly, maybe, but honestly.
should i just start deleting all of my submissions ?
or are we gonna be able to lock this section off again and very soon ?
-kabol
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At dawn I jumped the gate. I ran, ran from the hate. I know they got whips and chains, shackles for my hands and feet. String me, spit cut and salt me. Proof i'm not worth the price of a mule. Fuck forty acres, i just wanna provide my family with food. -Young Anera






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