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Hi all, I am new to this site. I am mostly here to get feed back on my work, poems & short stories a like. Please visit my page and comment my blogs!
Other than that, cheers to everyone here and I hope to get to know you better!
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~Jealousy's a Mother F***er~
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trying to... Just need to get the money together first!
~Jealousy's a Mother F***er~
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeelcome....
Please, no more blogs with stories. Welcome to The Cult. Hope you'll be able to join the workshop soon.
hello and welcome
I apologize for coming across as a spammer. I will be more patient with my posts, but I will be putting one a day... Sometimes two... As I am not permanitly accessable to a computer, it may be longer stretches than that. I am trying my hardest to get my writing and art recogonized, while I struggle and maintain my survival in REAL LIFE... *sigh* Thank you for your patience and assistance!
~Jealousy's a Mother F***er~
Good luck with getting recognized, but I think you're taking the wrong approach.
Your username doesn't fit with your intro at all!
BE SIMPLE, I SAY.
Welcome to the Cult.
"Good luck with getting recognized, but I think you're taking the wrong approach"
and what approach would you take?
"Your username doesn't fit with your intro at all! "
a walking and breathing contradiction, aren't we all?
~Jealousy's a Mother F***er~
tay has a point, that you come across as mischievous and unnecessarily complicated for a person who proclaims the simple goal of getting his writing out there and recognized; and i'm also in tune with brandon for that same reason:
i dont see why you plaster your writing anonymously and continually in an area that is absolutely not for writing and feedback. i read blogs from time to time because most of the time they are actual blogs and i can get a sense of someone else' troubles or personal reflection stories. yours are all about you making me read your submissions. i dont mean for you to get me wrong; i do like the fact that you are here and that you seem to like it here, but the only place for feedback is in the workshop, as stated in the guidelines.
i can put it like this:
the cult is made of three main sections:
- the news section, what includes updates on chucky p and interviews with various writers
- the forum, discussion boards for fun and relaxation and booktalk
- the writer's workshop, for writing and essays on writing and feedback and work
welcome to the cult. if you find trouble navigating this huge place, feel free to let me know.
best wishes, sincerely
-kabol
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play hard, like it's work to be done.
What I have shown you is reality. What you remember... that is the illusion.
I've tried to tell him before. I don't think he listens to advice he does not like.
i know, lady imke. i read your comment a few days ago. this was my last effort at explaining a little. love the new ava, btw. nate made it for you ?
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play hard, like it's work to be done.
I actually found it online somewhere and resized it myself! It was a lucky find. n_n
nice
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play hard, like it's work to be done.
Hi b. I really like what I read up there. You gotta have something to pawn or sell thats worth 40 bucks. Listen to every single word Jkabol tells you cuz he knows what he's talking about. If you take his advice you'll do just fine here. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff. Hope you get a permanent internet situation. Stay cool and never trust a guy that wears suspenders and a belt at the same time. I mean really, its one or the other.
i aint here to live, i'm just here to dream
i am currently homeless... I have pawned everything I own already... I am waiting for my friend to get her apartment next week so I can sleep on her floor... I have just been diagnosed with narcolepsy, therefor unable to hold a job, let alone conscious well being for more than a ten hour period with out my medication which is pushing almost one thousand dollars a month and I have no insurance...
Is that better for knowing what I am about?
And as for reading advice I don't agree with, I never didn't agree with that advice. The way I express my life, beliefs and attitudes is in the form of expression. I'm sorry I lack the ability to describe my life in anything but metaphors.
I went to the FAQ section in order to sign up for the "Sponsor" section but it has been down since I signed up.
When I get 40$ I will sign up for that. I wasn't aware that "my blog" section, in my home page was considered public opinion of what it is I should or shouldn't write? I understand now, the forum isn't to for that...
I have limit access to a computer, esp. one with the internet, as I stated before.
I'm sorry I'm currently going excessive real life issues and the only thing that makes me feel better is posting my art and getting feedback [when people are so kind as to give feed back, although I'm "in the wrong place"] so I know I'm on the right page.
My bad.
As for it being anonymous... My tag at the bottom of my posts says "the beautiful work of Jordan Newman" well, I would be Jordan Newman ...
~Jealousy's a Mother F***er~
In all sincerity, best of luck to you, Jordan Newman...
Don't heed the bitching of these people, man. They will bitch no matter what you do, or don't do. Permanently, accessible, recognized. Be your own get your own, you know what I'm saying? Be independent, nigga.
Your city stinks. I've been there. All the rich live on a mountain and the poor live down below and all of it, it reeks.
You could also sign up for a free blog at blogspot.com, then add a link to your sig that says something like "check out my new short, "____" at this link" etc etc.
Is that better for knowing what I am about?
Not really. Just because you're going through something doesn't mean it defines you. Plus, it kinda sounds like you're just itching for us to pat you on the back.
Everyone has problems. Amirite?
Anyway, here's a *hug*
Hope that helps.
don't hug him, you don't know where he's been!
Brentinlouis Wrote: What was that rule about being intentionally annoying?
You guys think besimple fell asleep while typing that last post? It was rather long.
Keep yer head up.
i aint here to live, i'm just here to dream
this is the kind of support i was looking for. not the jealousy that enrages others to incite (or at least, attempt to) pain
~Jealousy's a Mother F***er~
Here; Pat-pat-pat (on the back) Hello 
May your light shine from my eyes and may the joy remain when I am gone
this is the kind of support i was looking for. not the jealousy that enrages others to incite (or at least, attempt to) pain
Lolololololol, you're dumb.
There's a fuck ton of people on this site, all of whom have just as many or possibly even more problems than you do. So coming in and getting angry because no one wants to hear your sob story is silly.
We don't know you. You're just another face in the crowd, or in this case, a shitty username on a forum.
I retract my hug from earlier!
this is the kind of support i was looking for. not the jealousy that enrages others to incite (or at least, attempt to) pain
Lolololololol, you're dumb.
There's a fuck ton of people on this site, all of whom have just as many or possibly even more problems than you do. So coming in and getting angry because no one wants to hear your sob story is silly.
We don't know you. You're just another face in the crowd, or in this case, a shitty username on a forum.
I retract my hug from earlier!
I wasn't expecting help with my problems. Who goes to the internet in hopes of finding friendship? You are a loser if you do that... I was just on here looking for input for my art. I can see what kind of character you are, or lack thereof, by the name calling and attempt to 'hurt' me with the 'lack of' 'digital love.' Take your hug back? Go a head, I never embraced it you... See, how I pause there, and hold back on an insult? that's not how you debate.
I can see you lack any social structure & your emotions run your life. Get a reality check, then maybe you can find someone who cares enough about you to even dot you into a poem or story, so you can then therefore be, 'written to life,' lmfao.
~Jealousy's a Mother F***er~
I wasn't expecting help with my problems. Who goes to the internet in hopes of finding friendship? You are a loser if you do that... I was just on here looking for input for my art.
Your art is laughable.
There. Now you can go back to spitting in people's onion rings.
thanks for sharing.blackhawk tactical pants.
— Spambot
"I could have done worse!" exultantly cried the murderer Lebret, sentenced at Rouen to hard labor for life. — Félix Fénéon
this is the kind of support i was looking for. not the jealousy that enrages others to incite (or at least, attempt to) pain
Lolololololol, you're dumb.
There's a fuck ton of people on this site, all of whom have just as many or possibly even more problems than you do. So coming in and getting angry because no one wants to hear your sob story is silly.
We don't know you. You're just another face in the crowd, or in this case, a shitty username on a forum.
I retract my hug from earlier!
I wasn't expecting help with my problems. Who goes to the internet in hopes of finding friendship? You are a loser if you do that... I was just on here looking for input for my art. I can see what kind of character you are, or lack thereof, by the name calling and attempt to 'hurt' me with the 'lack of' 'digital love.' Take your hug back? Go a head, I never embraced it you... See, how I pause there, and hold back on an insult? that's not how you debate.
I can see you lack any social structure & your emotions run your life. Get a reality check, then maybe you can find someone who cares enough about you to even dot you into a poem or story, so you can then therefore be, 'written to life,' lmfao.
Omg dude. You look so dumb right now. You have no idea about taylor, or anything on this site. So, go ahead a just be a fucking idoit about your emotions, and then get bored, and don't come back. that's what they all do.
also, in defense of taylor, here's a thing from glee.
Brentinlouis Wrote: What was that rule about being intentionally annoying?
A better question: WHO GOES ON THE INTERNET WHEN THEY'RE "HOMELESS"?
PS- Levi, ahmunna hug you real good for the glee clip.
<3
i typed you look so dumb right now, and i was like, WAIT. THERE IS A SONG I NEED TO GO WITH THIS.
Brentinlouis Wrote: What was that rule about being intentionally annoying?
HAHAHA. I was like "Wow. Take A Bow is surprisingly PERFECT for this moment." Much better than "Single Ladies" or "Bust A Move" don'tcha think?
hahahah I just watched that clip, and I was like, damn, she is such a good singer, why can't she just get signed, and get out of that high school? But then i was like, oh shit, wait. she is signed. she's on a show called glee, which isn't real.
Then I got sad.
she's been on broadway too! she was in Spring Awakening, which is amazing.
I love your sig, taylor!!
Brentinlouis Wrote: What was that rule about being intentionally annoying?
Hahahaha, I need to watch musicals with you for the rest of my life.
Also, every time I post something and see my sig below it, I feel like Emma is cheering me on.
and what approach would you take?
"Your username doesn't fit with your intro at all! "
a walking and breathing contradiction, aren't we all?
I would take the approach I'm taking now because that works for me. I have no helpful advice other than the advice I already gave: join workshop. Ignoring that advice hasn't quite panned out well so far on the forum, has it?
I wasn't expecting help with my problems. Who goes to the internet in hopes of finding friendship? You are a loser if you do that... I was just on here looking for input for my art.
Your art is laughable.
There. Now you can go back to spitting in people's onion rings.
lmao you may have a disgusting minimum wage job where you hate your life because your pathetic. real artists survive on the art... not relying on others... haha. get real, go get a life.
~Jealousy's a Mother F***er~
and what approach would you take?
"Your username doesn't fit with your intro at all! "
a walking and breathing contradiction, aren't we all?
I would take the approach I'm taking now because that works for me. I have no helpful advice other than the advice I already gave: join workshop. Ignoring that advice hasn't quite panned out well so far on the forum, has it?
How has it not worked? It just getting me prepared for the real art industry, that's full of know-it all wanna-be's who think their life is superior to others... It's panned out all to well. And I will be signing up for the work shop ASAP. Just pulling finances together to survive; the fourty dollars needed to sign up will be all in due time.
Like I stated before, the sponsor ship aspect in the FAQ's is not working... So, in the mean time- you can all kiss my ass. I don't rely on anyone for my self-worth, epically not a bunch of whiny little spoiled brats on an internet forum.
amazing how much self pity exists in the world...
get a grip, grow up, and quit being so full of yourself you fucking useless excuses for a human existence.
~Jealousy's a Mother F***er~
and what approach would you take?
"Your username doesn't fit with your intro at all! "
a walking and breathing contradiction, aren't we all?
I would take the approach I'm taking now because that works for me. I have no helpful advice other than the advice I already gave: join workshop. Ignoring that advice hasn't quite panned out well so far on the forum, has it?
How has it not worked? It just getting me prepared for the real art industry, that's full of know-it all wanna-be's who think their life is superior to others... It's panned out all to well. And I will be signing up for the work shop ASAP. Just pulling finances together to survive; the fourty dollars needed to sign up will be all in due time.
Like I stated before, the sponsor ship aspect in the FAQ's is not working... So, in the mean time- you can all kiss my ass. I don't rely on anyone for my self-worth, epically not a bunch of whiny little spoiled brats on an internet forum.
amazing how much self pity exists in the world...
get a grip, grow up, and quit being so full of yourself you fucking useless excuses for a human existence.
If you're going to have that attitude, don't join. We have a professional environment based on respect for each other and the common goal of bettering our craft. What we don't need is some bratty child with a chip on their shoulder derailing that. So I'm going to state this quite plainly so the forum, workshop members, and moderators can all see: get your attitude in check and act like a professional. If you can't do those two very simple things, then don't waste our time.
If you want to play starving artist, go stand on a soapbox and read your shit from there. Some of us here are trying to make careers out of this.
I wasn't expecting help with my problems. Who goes to the internet in hopes of finding friendship? You are a loser if you do that... I was just on here looking for input for my art.
Your art is laughable.
There. Now you can go back to spitting in people's onion rings.
lmao you may have a disgusting minimum wage job where you hate your life because your pathetic. real artists survive on the art... not relying on others... haha. get real, go get a life.
He's a writer and a musician. He speaks three (maybe four) different languages, and is well read on many subjects, including a great knowledge of philosophy.
Now, I realize that you may feel you're being attacked, but if that's how you feel, 1. you may leave, 2. you may PM these people to try and work out the issues with them, because right now, you're making statements about people that you know nothing about, whereas you've given us information about your life, hence the statements made by others.
I will reinforce what Brandon said. If you feel that this place is filled with spoiled brats, please, don't bother joining workshop. It's a place for people who are serious about writing, and I will not appreciate it if anyone attempts to undermine that. It's an extremely valuable resource for me, and I will not see it ruined.
I wasn't expecting help with my problems. Who goes to the internet in hopes of finding friendship? You are a loser if you do that... I was just on here looking for input for my art.
Your art is laughable.
There. Now you can go back to spitting in people's onion rings.
lmao you may have a disgusting minimum wage job where you hate your life because your pathetic. real artists survive on the art... not relying on others... haha. get real, go get a life.
Hey hey! You you! I don't like your attitude!
No way! No way! I think you need a one one!
Hey hey! You you! You're a silly-silly!
Your English is really, really poor. How do you expect to be taken seriously when you can't even get your basic linguistic toolkit organized?
As for my minimum wage job, a) yo mama actually pays me well, 
I don't have a job, or c) I'm narcoleptic too, man! I'm always falling asleZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ.
See how moronic I look when I just stoop to insults? That's you! That's what you look like! Yes, baby, that's YOU in the mirror! Look how fat your cheeks are when you're angry. Cutey-pie.
More seriously: you ought to stop posting your art in blog form. It's too good for that. The blog form, I mean. Ha! I did a funny. Look at me, everyone! I'm an attention whore!
I wrote a wonderful song just for you, which was made famous by the great, the only, the incredible Barry Manilow:
I remember all my life
Raining down as cold as ice
A shadow of a man
A face through a window
Crying in the night
The night goes into
Morning, just another day
Happy people pass my way
Looking in their eyes
I see a memory
I never realized
you made me so happy, oh Mandy
Well you came and you gave without taking
but I sent you away, oh Mandy
well you kissed me and stopped me from shaking
I need you today, oh Mandy
I'm standing on the edge of time
I Walked away when love was mine
Caught up in a world of uphill climbing
The tears are in my mind
And nothing is rhyming, oh Mandy
Well you came and you gave without taking
but I sent you away, oh Mandy
well you kissed me and stopped me from shaking
And I need you today, oh Mandy
Yesterday's a dream I face the morning
Crying on the breeze
the pain is calling, oh Mandy
Well you came and you gave without taking
but I sent you away, oh Mandy
well you kissed me and stopped me from shaking
And I need you today, oh Mandy
thanks for sharing.blackhawk tactical pants.
— Spambot
"I could have done worse!" exultantly cried the murderer Lebret, sentenced at Rouen to hard labor for life. — Félix Fénéon
Women just don't take a shine to me. I don't know why. Sometimes I'll see a beautiful little girl, in a lace dress, cherry lipgloss and go to strike up a conversation. Rarely do I get past two minutes before they burst into laughter, and once again, it's a lonely night.
It's hard to put in real words but I just want someone *special* you know? Someone who I can watch the sunrise with. Someone who doesn't mind me wearing socks during sex. Someone who loves Jurassic Park II as much as me. Someone who finds risotto to be an okay dish, but wouldn't want it more than once a month because frankly it gives me gas.
Someone to hold my hand, look me in the eye and tell me it's all going to be okay.
And is it going to be okay? I mean I'm what, twenty-something, and life's just whirring by too fast for comfort. I feel like I'm stuck on a merry-go-round; but the merry-go-round is broken, and spinning out of control. And also on the merry-go-round are the two men from Strangers On A Train.
A sense of humour... that's the most important thing.
There is nothing worse than sitting in the bath crying.
Frère Jacques, frère Jacques,
Dormez-vous? Dormez-vous?
Sonnez les matines! Sonnez les matines!
Ding, dang, dong. Ding, dang, dong.
It's hard to put in real words but I just want someone *special* you know? Someone who I can watch the sunrise with. Someone who doesn't mind me wearing socks during sex. Someone who loves Jurassic Park II as much as me. Someone who finds risotto to be an okay dish, but wouldn't want it more than once a month because frankly it gives me gas.
Someone to hold my hand, look me in the eye and tell me it's all going to be okay.
And is it going to be okay? I mean I'm what, twenty-something, and life's just whirring by too fast for comfort. I feel like I'm stuck on a merry-go-round; but the merry-go-round is broken, and spinning out of control. And also on the merry-go-round are the two men from Strangers On A Train.
A sense of humour... that's the most important thing.
There is nothing worse than sitting in the bath crying.
Frère Jacques, frère Jacques,
Dormez-vous? Dormez-vous?
Sonnez les matines! Sonnez les matines!
Ding, dang, dong. Ding, dang, dong.
Ladies and gentlemen: my housemate.
thanks for sharing.blackhawk tactical pants.
— Spambot
"I could have done worse!" exultantly cried the murderer Lebret, sentenced at Rouen to hard labor for life. — Félix Fénéon
It's hard to put in real words but I just want someone *special* you know? Someone who I can watch the sunrise with. Someone who doesn't mind me wearing socks during sex. Someone who loves Jurassic Park II as much as me. Someone who finds risotto to be an okay dish, but wouldn't want it more than once a month because frankly it gives me gas.
Someone to hold my hand, look me in the eye and tell me it's all going to be okay.
And is it going to be okay? I mean I'm what, twenty-something, and life's just whirring by too fast for comfort. I feel like I'm stuck on a merry-go-round; but the merry-go-round is broken, and spinning out of control. And also on the merry-go-round are the two men from Strangers On A Train.
A sense of humour... that's the most important thing.
There is nothing worse than sitting in the bath crying.
Frère Jacques, frère Jacques,
Dormez-vous? Dormez-vous?
Sonnez les matines! Sonnez les matines!
Ding, dang, dong. Ding, dang, dong.
Ladies and gentlemen: my housemate.
What are you implying, you fat fuck?
thanks for sharing.blackhawk tactical pants.
— Spambot
"I could have done worse!" exultantly cried the murderer Lebret, sentenced at Rouen to hard labor for life. — Félix Fénéon
What I'm implying is this:
I'm going to lay my eggs in you.
Spread my legs like mustard on a firm French sausage.
thanks for sharing.blackhawk tactical pants.
— Spambot
"I could have done worse!" exultantly cried the murderer Lebret, sentenced at Rouen to hard labor for life. — Félix Fénéon
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