EVERYONE.
i wrote two poems. tell me what you all think, please 
I was born in love.
My early years we're filled with obnoxious music
needles, powder, and smoke.
They did me wrong.
Then I got thrown into a different kind of love.
A cleaner, more conservitative love.
A strict kind of love.
Although that love was pure I longed for the first love.
The love that did me wrong, the love I forgave.
Although the second was clean and pure.
Why do we always go back to the love that did us wrong?
and the second..
That misleading heartbeat.
So loudly beneath your chest,
leading me to beleive that yes, you really like me.
yes, i excite you.
yes,yes,yes.
Wrong.
the next day confused and ignoring sleep and food.
all my self worth goes to you.
my self worth is not my own, just like our bodies are not our own.
if i think highly of myself i will take it too far.
its either black or white.
life or death; there is no being content.
this fuck of a being, a body, a face.
this fuck of a mistake that god made.
or this lovely girl standing in the mirror.
with her blue eyes.
Yes,yes,yes
that's what your heartbeat leads me too.
Yes,yes,yes,
if only i could beleive what other people say is true.
even if you dont like the poems, tell me how i can improve <3
danielle xo
Thesaurus.
The language is really simple. It feels like there is no effort to do anything other than write a paragraph and then break it up and call it poetry. I'm not saying you should give it up or anything. Do whatever pleases you, but you have to understand that there is much more that goes into writing poetry than the subjects you write about or the structure of it.
I'd be interested to know how long you spent writing those two poems. Would you be willing to tell me that?
Invest in a poetry class.
I already gave you advice in the General Discussion thread.
Stop spamming.
Seriously!
If you keep spamming, it means I have to do my job here. And everybody will tell you I'm lazy.
Also, listen to Kenzie and Fano. I think they're on to something.
please delete the threads Pete. Or at least merge them?
I don't think I have the power to merge...
I deleted the one. There are three right?
I think so, yeah. Seems to be more every time I look
I'm logging out, if there are more - feel free to PM me.
also - HAPPY BIRTHDAY KIT! 
Thank you. And THANK YOU
also - HAPPY BIRTHDAY KIT! :D
LAAAZZEEE
I'm on vacation, Pete. You have to pick up the slack.
This only means one thing...
CULTIES RUN WILD!
Just because I'm on holiday doesn't mean I can't keep an eye on this place. I'm watching you, missy!
Conservitative? That sure is a special kind of love.
I think this should be Kit's birthday thread, the sequel.
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I mean, nutella.
Do poems bother you guys that much
Sure do. Spam even more so though.
Who me? I'm sweet and innocent and nice. 
Fuck!
CULTIES RUN WILD!
I'm sorry Sarah... BAN!
Negative attitude? BAN!
Off topic! BAN!
Oh no... I'm dizzy with power.
Atta boy.
haha - I'm cleaning house Frank!
But I won't ban Justlikebeautyx
And then the cult will become a place where every new post is the exact same peom. Oh nos!
BANNED?
It's weird, Sarah is impossible to ban. My computer crashed the first time so I tried from my phone and then it made my phone reboot. You win this round Sarah, you win this round...
MWAHAHAHAHAHA!
Her cuteness is indestructible.
Like that of a tardigrade.
you should probably keep those somewhere private.
and stop spamming.