The Ones Who Walk Away From Omelas
This short story really is amazing. I am sort of going to spoil it here, so....don't read this if you don't want to be spoiled.
n the story, Omelas is a utopian city of happiness and delight, whose inhabitants are smart and cultured. Everything about Omelas is pleasing, except for the secret of the city: the good fortune of Omelas requires that a single unfortunate child be kept in perpetual filth, darkness and misery, and that all her citizens should be told of this on coming of age.
After being exposed to the truth, most of the people of Omelas are initially shocked and disgusted, but are ultimately able to come to terms with the fact and resolve to live their lives in such a manner as to make the suffering of the unfortunate child worth it. However, some few of the citizens, young or old, silently walk away from the city, and no one knows where they go. The story ends with "The place they go towards is a place even less imaginable to us than the city of happiness. I cannot describe it at all. It is possible it does not exist. But they seem to know where they are going, the ones who walk away from Omelas."
What do you think of this idea? I read this story in like, 7th or 8th grade as a part of a Utopian study in my gifted english class. I don't think I really understood. I'd like to read it again. Is this idea justifiable?
If it were true, would you walk away, or stay put?
Interesting subject.
Discuss? Or leave me hanging?

Brentinlouis Wrote: What was that rule about being intentionally annoying?
Never heard of it, but I'd sure as hell like to visit!
(Kids love filth.)
Essentially, it's how we live already, but substitute the child in the basement for a third world country whose slave/child labor we benefit on. Part of the story, if you're too lazy to read, is that everyone knows the child is there and many go to see it while they are still young, so they are faced with the inhumanity by which they thrive. Most stay and most never return to look at the child, but some, as is said above, walk away from the town never to return. Most in the city are content to just know it exists without ever looking at it. It is fully explained to them, they understand, they move on.
It's interesting, really. And, like i said, it's really the state of the world on a grander scale. We benefit from the pain of others, often unseen or never seen, but fully acknowledged [though, is it fully understandable without seeing it with your own eyes?] and understood, but we move on and keep on living.
So, would i stay or would i go? I think we've all already answered.
Shit, that's pretty crazy. I guess you're right! Ugh.

Brentinlouis Wrote: What was that rule about being intentionally annoying?
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Sometimes i wonder who, then, are the people who leave, because they must go somewhere, and somewhere must exist, mustn't it? And they don't free the child, which is what the Mother Theresa's of the world try to do, but they just leave. It's like the Giver. Where is this elsewhere and what is it?!
In my Ethics class, we had a discussion about whether or not this is justifiable in any way shape or form, and i guess that's an interesting question of sorts. I mean, should the suffering of even a single person be traded for the sublimity of the whole?
Even discounting the fact that on a macrocosm, we already exist this way. Let's just say that this city exists and is anomalous, both in its level of happiness and in its singular form of child abuse. Is it actually wrong? And is that even the right question? Presumably, without this child, the city would return to a state of normalcy, the state we exist in every day. What is the price for a life of complete happiness? Is one person's life too much a price? What then is justifiable? Would it be different if the person, at a certain age, chose to be the sacrificial human that kept life going? Let's say an old man is the one who happiness is traded for. I think this would disturb people less, having a person nearing death to be locked up and beaten, but is his life any less valuable than the child's? I mean that in a metaphysical way, not in a pragmatic way.
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if there were such a society, and the choice could be made, i guess I would be one to just accept it. I mean, I guess when put the question, is all of society's happiness worth this? I'd say yes. Maybe that makes me less, or a hypocrite, but I suppose I'd just have to live with that secret. that there was suffering going on in our perfect word. I think one secret is worth it.

Brentinlouis Wrote: What was that rule about being intentionally annoying?
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you couldn't though. In the confines of the world, you could not make it better. Or you'd be killed, or cast out, or whatever.

Brentinlouis Wrote: What was that rule about being intentionally annoying?
Then again, if all of the evil and suffering in the world could be eradicated forever by simply killing one person, would approve of that? Not do it yourself, just approve of it.
Well, the child doesn't die, which is part of it. Your ongoing happiness is caused by it's ongoing suffering.
In my economics class I read an article by some economist that talked about ethics in the world economy. He asked if you would kill a single baby in exchange for giving every poor village in Africa $50 million dollars.
They're both difficult questions to answer. At first you're horrified by the thought of killing a human being, but then you realize how many lives you can save. Then you're stuck.
Part of the situation is that you realise that this is going on. You also know that everyone's life is better than it was before. So it's not simply a matter of trading, but discontinuing the trade. The people that walk away choose to no longer accept this trade, which is different than discontinuing the trade. So it's not simply a question of is it okay to do this, but a question of can i live with myself knowing that i'm benefiting from the child's suffering, which, to me, is an important difference. The ones who walk away cannot.
I wouldn't be okay with it. I haven't read the story yet, so I don't know the child's conditions, but I wouldn't be okay with being passive and doing nothing to try to help it, especially if I were forced to witness his or her suffering.
I would actively try to make its life better, if I could.
Helping the child ceases any benefit from the child. I'm not sure if you're familiar with cases where people've been locked in their rooms for their entire lives, but that's essentially what this is. The child cannot speak, cannot walk, cannot really do anything. In a sense, there's no saving this child or making it into what it should have been allowed to be. By freeing the child, you may improve its life by giving it reprieve from torment, but it will always be tormented by its inability to ever relate to another human, to ever really even be human in the way that we understand what a human is. Even with intense therapy that lasts for the rest of their life, their mental and physical abilities will not increase in any significant way.
So, in saving the child, you only remove it from a room and put it in a different one, because whatever humanity the child could have had is trapped in a brain that never matured.
And then, what if they just repeated the process? If you treat the new child kindly and try to improve its miserable living conditions, you lose the benefit. So the people of the city are the ones who need to be changed, not the child's condition. Clearly, they think it's justifiable. How would you change their minds since they've already picked their choice?
But, yeah, is it enough to walk away? Does anyone gain anything from you walking away?
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ive read this a couple times. it seems like college professors love this. likely because its a portland (oregon, anyway) author that gets put into anthologies. however i dislike the story. maybe from a writing standpoint, by which i mean it may as well be flash fiction. it's entirely expository and has no arch. yuck. i also dont feel like it asks the question appropriately. if you kill someone, or at least destroy their life, for a utopia, would you? where the story fails is that the ensuing generations dont make that choice, which seems to be the crux of the debate in the story. rather than make the choice for themselves, it is forced upon them. if they dont like it they can.... fuck off?
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“...There are so many ways of being despicable it quite makes one's head spin. But the way to be really despicable is to be contemptuous of other people's pain. You ought to have some apprehension that the man you see before you was once even younger than you are now and arrived at his present wretchedness by imperceptible degrees.”
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Here's the full story for those interested.
Essentially, it's how we live already, but substitute the child in the basement for a third world country whose slave/child labor we benefit on. Part of the story, if you're too lazy to read, is that everyone knows the child is there and many go to see it while they are still young, so they are faced with the inhumanity by which they thrive. Most stay and most never return to look at the child, but some, as is said above, walk away from the town never to return. Most in the city are content to just know it exists without ever looking at it. It is fully explained to them, they understand, they move on.
It's interesting, really. And, like i said, it's really the state of the world on a grander scale. We benefit from the pain of others, often unseen or never seen, but fully acknowledged [though, is it fully understandable without seeing it with your own eyes?] and understood, but we move on and keep on living.
So, would i stay or would i go? I think we've all already answered.
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