To be emasculated is the ony way not to betray
Hey guys i am the Titass writer, i would like to share with you the Question on the subject of this Topic. I wrote a short story about this matter.Click on the following link to read it:
http://titwriter.blogspot.com/2012/01/emasculated.html
tell me what u think..
More titass plz
I think that capitalization is your friend.
oh man I missed this guy so much
“if you want to be a bird,” you said once, “with colorful plumage and buoyant trills, you must also be ready for hollow bones."
I actually tried to read the story but it hurt my eyes. It literally hurt my eyes.
This is why we can't have nice things.
All I managed was skimming it.
That's probably more than I managed. It was like rubbing fine-grain sandpaper on my corneas.
This is why we can't have nice things.
spoiler
His girlfriend says she is going to screw other guys at the end.
I don't know what happens in the middle. Something about a doctor, and I think there were a bunch of other guys getting the same whatever he was getting.
The two end sentences are great lmao
"anything for love!"
I read the whole thing and it actually hurt my eyes too. not in a pretentious, "this is bad writing" kind of way, but like tuffy said. my eyes are physically strained.
I imagined the entire story as an italian soap opera and then it became much better. titass writer, you should write for daytime television.
“if you want to be a bird,” you said once, “with colorful plumage and buoyant trills, you must also be ready for hollow bones."
But, please, Italian daytime television.
This is why we can't have nice things.
This is what I'm saying!
This is why we can't have nice things.
You might try promoting your work here http://chuckpalahniuk.net/forum/1000035
rather than in the General Discussion forum.
Or I suggest you make like a real writer and take it to LitReactor.
This is why we can't have nice things.