Secondhand Strippers
If you're not part of the Writer's Workshop, then this will be your first time seeing this. It was my first submission to the workshop and I'm very happy with the reactions I got from it.
Again, much thanks to all who read and reviewed it there. You guys gave me a lot of great feedback and ideas.
To set this up...the title actually says a lot about what you're going to read. It's part of a novel, and for this particular piece, the plot is fairly thin since it's an establishment chapter. It's a fun read, though.
Not looking for any in-depth critiques...just read and enjoy, and if you want--react.
-BT-
Nate, if you're gonna talk shit...that's cool, man.
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www.matthewcdrake.blogspot.com
Now I write, when I'm away, letters that you'll never read.
It's what Nate does best, man. You'll grow to love him for it.
Really though, this will get read much more in Fan Submissions rather than Blogs as most blogs get bypassed completely.
Oh, I already love Nate...and his desktop backgrounds.
I'll do that next time.
I did it for you this time.
Sometimes when I'm really stoned, and I close my eyes, I can't honestly say whether or not I'm wearing a hat. - Nightrious
Oh, very cool. Thanks!
I want more!
Really good stuff, for sure.
That was nothin'.
Wait'll you see my "Wholesale Whores"
I'm intrigued...
Then put some socks on because they're about to be knocked off.
Hey, Tietz, you ought to place this piece
within the forum meant for such affairs.
Indeed, by posting it in here you risk
Not getting the critiques you wisely seek.
Spartan art is the real made hysterical.