Rockets Fall on Rocket Falls
Lady Chaos and a couple others mentioned wanting to read some of my work. I'm pretty paranoid about putting my stuff on the internet, so here's a compromise... the very first short story I wrote. I'm never going to attempt to publish it since it's not as good as my newer stuff and I've really developed as a writer since then. It is copyrighted to myself, but feel free to steal an idea or two from it if you like, since I'm not going to attempt to revise it enough to publish it, and if I do, it'll be an almost completely different story by then.
It's pretty large ( ~3000 words), so [URL=http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Ars%20Moriendi/167541/]here's a link to it[/URL] so it doesn't take up a crapton of space here
sorry i couldn't read it cause the guys name is ashley, names are key in story telling for me.
I will read this for sure--I probally will wait to print it off--I read things better that way--I will tell you what I think, even though i am sure you don't care.,
[QUOTE=Alexanderdeath25;1112190]I will read this for sure--I probally will wait to print it off--I read things better that way--I will tell you what I think, even though i am sure you don't care.,[/QUOTE]
If you got somethin to say about it feel free. You're right though, I don't care, but that's because I abandoned that story some time ago, and I'm not looking for critique. I only put a story up because there was interest expressed in reading some of my work. I'm very selective about who reads my work before it's published, which is why I posted my very first short story instead of one I care about.
You driving me crazy...I like your story very much...Like how you`re playing with the forms...
Oh,if I could write so...OK, I can write russian very well,but my english not so perfect...
Why are you so far away?
Keep writing...