Ritt writes....a poem?!?!?

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Sat, 12/01/2007 - 07:28
Ritt
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DELETE FUCKING EVERYTHING!

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Sat, 12/01/2007 - 07:35
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morning_alcoholic
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I liked it, except for the word "labia".
It makes me feel a little ill.

Otherwise, applause for your [B]first effort!!![/B]

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Sun, 12/02/2007 - 05:09
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Ritt
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Thank you very much.

Yeah, labia isn't really that fancy of a word. It kind of sounds like a bug. The labia bug!

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Sun, 12/02/2007 - 07:06
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Well done!

Writing poems - not my talent... So Good luck!

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