My short that I'm too insecure to share with the big katz in the writers workshop
I'm scared! I'm scared! I'm scared!
I like this.
Very orginal, y'know, with the idea of taking something that's "traditional" in comedy and sculpting something new out of it.
Kinda gross, sort of disgusting, with a dash humor.
Nice combo
Thanks for the lovely criticism(sp?????????) both of you...
Simon57, I havn't read Rant yet but I intend to eventually...so I really hope you didn't just spoil something!!!!!!!!
Haha, nothing was spoiled - lets just say thay there's one or two slight parallels that you'll find for yourself!
Y'know, having read your short story for the second time i really like it.
ah yes the old cough syrup binge... those days are behind me now... god i miss them. don't suppose i can go back there now.
good story, i liked it.
I agree. Entertaining, even though it's gross and shouldn't be. Haha
Oh yeah, and have you read Rant?
I really enjoyed it, you shouldnt be so insecure about your work. Keep it up!


I enjoyed that, it's a good read, you seem to get into your stride as it goes on.
Pretty like [i]Rant[/i] in a couple of places, but not enough to be an issue!