My short that I'm too insecure to share with the big katz in the writers workshop

I enjoyed that, it's a good read, you seem to get into your stride as it goes on.

Pretty like [i]Rant[/i] in a couple of places, but not enough to be an issue!

I like this.

Very orginal, y'know, with the idea of taking something that's "traditional" in comedy and sculpting something new out of it.

Kinda gross, sort of disgusting, with a dash humor.
Nice combo

Thanks for the lovely criticism(sp?????????) both of you...

Simon57, I havn't read Rant yet but I intend to eventually...so I really hope you didn't just spoil something!!!!!!!!

Haha, nothing was spoiled - lets just say thay there's one or two slight parallels that you'll find for yourself!

Y'know, having read your short story for the second time i really like it.

ah yes the old cough syrup binge... those days are behind me now... god i miss them. don't suppose i can go back there now.

good story, i liked it.

I agree. Entertaining, even though it's gross and shouldn't be. Haha

Oh yeah, and have you read Rant?

I really enjoyed it, you shouldnt be so insecure about your work. Keep it up!