"Give Me" Invisible Monster Tribute
Just finished this book today, and made this After Effects piece today, 
. My first post on the boards, and I hope you all enjoy!
http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=60045875
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Just a minor critique. You need to work on your kerning.
for instance:
Gi ve
S you in your A's. Don't wear a C and J all over your B's
what the heck is kerning?
adjusting space between letters.
SKYWHALE
With a frigate's anchors for my bridle-bits and fasces of harpoons for spurs, would I could mount that whale and leap the topmost skies, to see whether the fabled heavens with all their countless tents really lie encamped beyond my mortal sight! -Moby Dick, LVII
Thanks for the comments and constructive criticism. How much kerning should I be looking for in the word give? The font is actually Courier New, and should have all been auto adjusted to be even, but sometimes between words like "v" or "g" it will push it out a bit. Good things to notice and thank you for pointing that out. The reason I didn't put the typewrite sound to "give", is simply put, it was already there. Didn't feel right at all. Just a feeling when I was creating it. I will be uploading my other pieces in a few, got a couple of illustrations/typography pieces that I made, .
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This is a quality fan submission thread.
But is there any reason why you didn't use the typewriter sound effect for "Give?"