Dont Know Where to Post This So Im Putting It Here
"Colors of a Lost Love"
Reds the color I see
when I start to think
back on the things
that she did to me
Blue is the hue
I soon fell into
after it was through
my world did too
Green is my envy
after she left me
how she took everything
leaving me completely empty
All these colors have mixed
they create the color of hate
now my true colors don’t exist
pain has stained me like paint
Gray becomes the tone
when a souls this alone
the place love was grown
has now turned to stone
Blackness is the void
where emotions were deployed
stripping me of all joy
abandoned and destroyed
Any comments... critique... advise... love/hate... or just directions to where creative poetry/story-telling should be posted would be much appreciated.
[QUOTE=bigshrimpn;1100676]Good stuff dude. Puts me in the mood.
Red is the color of Columbia's monthly bete noir
Thus, blue is the color of the song I sing
Yellow is the color of the cheek that I turn
while wondering what next month's color will bring[/QUOTE]
Haha, are you still on about that hott colombian girl ?
:grinning-
She has my <3. I went to her place last night to tell her that I couldn't deal with her unjustified jealousy and insecurities and I may have jumped the gun when decideng how wonderful of a person she was. I stormed out between her tears.
I returned after a drive around the blosck to tell her that maybe I could. For all the light that she brings into my life, the few clouds should go unnotticed. Or at least blissfully overlooked. Or at least tolerated.
She makes me smile.
[QUOTE=bigshrimpn;1100679]She has my <3. I went to her place last night to tell her that I couldn't deal with her unjustified jealousy and insecurities and I may have jumped the gun when decideng how wonderful of a person she was. I stormed out between her tears.
I returned after a drive around the blosck to tell her that maybe I could. For all the light that she brings into my life, the few clouds should go unnotticed. Or at least blissfully overlooked. Or at least tolerated.
She makes me smile.[/QUOTE]
Awwww!
Shrimp's in [I]LOVE!!!![/I] To a colombian girl!!!!! <3
She's not using you for your passport is she??? Oh well, I hope things look up for you guys! 
They're gonna have to. How someone so beautiful could be so insecure is beyond me. But I'm too old to try to figure it out. She needs to accept that I'm all about her and if the desire to be with someone else arises, she will be the first to know.
Oh and... :hijacked:
[QUOTE=bigshrimpn;1100686]Oh and... :hijacked:[/QUOTE]
Lawl.
I really did read your poem Deludedfool. It's quite pretty. 
oh, shrimp.....thats so sweet. how you make girls cry and stuff and then come back and rescue their hearts from despair. wait...didnt you meet some girls last night?
some things never change.
Mail just got here. No package. 
I really did read your poem Deludedfool. It's quite pretty. :)[/QUOTE]
Thank you.
Good stuff dude. Puts me in the mood.
Red is the color of Columbia's monthly bete noir
Thus, blue is the color of the song I sing
Yellow is the color of the cheek that I turn
while wondering what next month's color will bring