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Even Angels Couldn't Save You Now

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this is the prologue and first chapter of a story i am writing.

no proofreading or editing has been done, so sorry about any of that kind of mess.

i am looking for criticism and to hear what readers think.

i am an amateur and this is my first peice ever.

so whenever you have freetime read this and let me know what you think. i know its a weird request...but i am asking everyone i can. its a story i am working on called Even Angels Couldnt Save You Now. so far i am nowhere near completion and have not proofread or edited it in any way...just kind of winging it and writing right now.     just whenever you have a chance to read it. thanks/////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

“It is better to conquer yourself than to win a thousand battles. Then the victory is yours. It cannot be taken from you, not by angels or by demons, heaven or hell.”-Hindu Prince Gautama Siddharta