Chuck Palahniuk's November Essay, "A Story from Scratch, Act Two"
Howdy, folks. Welcome to November. I hope you all had a fun Halloween. I know I did. Today, we continue with, what is easily, one of the best features from Chuck we have ever included on this site. Here's a recap, straight from the horse's mouth:
For the next three essays I'll be presenting three drafts of a short story I'm writing for a Dark Delicacies anthology. Folks have been asking for this kind of in-progress demonstration. Each draft will describe my process and choices -- and the finished, polished version will be out in the actual book.
I can only tell you how insanely unique and rare it is to have a bestselling author breaking down his work like this for his fans. Chuck's not doing this to showcase any sort of style. This is all about teaching all of you, who might be interested, how to improve your writing craft. This are tools from his own arsenal that he applies on every book he writes. Furthermore, he's detailing his methods within a horror short story that isn't even published yet! So to give you all a little taste of what these essays are like, here's a sample from this month's:
Sitting behind the steering wheel, Hank twists one shoulder backward, hooking his arm over the seat back and pinching the tab of the door lock between two fingers. Pulling up the tab, he reaches down and yanks the handle to throw open the door, saying, “Get in the car.” He says, “Get in the fucking car, now.”
Note: Damn I hate repeating “backward” and “back” so close together, but that’s fixable in the next draft. All of this action serves to reintroduce Hank to the reader and place him in the drivers seat. That way we avoid passive statements like “Hank was driving” or “Hank’s at the steering wheel.” Don’t show the reader anything unless that thing is moving or acting in relation to other things. Yeah, like in a movie. Remember: People hate slide shows, but they love movies.
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