The Womb-Fury

Posted May 20th, 2008 by corellion

I am starting to opine that I shall need to return to college and proceed through to university. I am growing stupider and have become mired and moored in my own hebetude. This clumsy apathy is simply that, and not an intelligent acquiescence of being. I do not think my attempts at dissolving periphrasty are clever, but there's no point in reading a word if one does not put it to use. I do not know what to write about. It seems what has been written about before in abundance is tedious wank and what has only been written about sparingly has been done so with the utmost care and generosity, leaving nothing at all to write about, and I'm sure I have more pressing matters but meh. I'm going on a picnic tomorrow, I may try to friendly.

whatthebillyo@y...
May 20th, 2008

This was some masturbatory word vomit; is doesn't seem like you're considering an audience at all.  And the following is not true:

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no point in reading a word if one does not put it to use.

 

The reason to read a word is because an author found it the most concise, accurate or robust term to describe something.  In these instances, your word choices  [b] do not [/b] qualify as any of those, especially in the first sentece.  You're writing in the passive voice.  Stop that.   "starting to opine that i shall return to college and proceed through"?  You're right, it's not clever.  


Mexicreatin
May 20th, 2008

i really like the term "womb-fury"... of course... i read it as womb furry... which brings all types of different ideas to mind.


Nightrious
May 20th, 2008

I agree with any sentence that claims there's no point to something.


whatthebillyo@y...
May 20th, 2008

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I agree with any sentence that claims there's no point to something

 

badumpbump.  Said statement said "no point if" which should actually be construed as "The point is".  Another example of indirect meandering writing. 


Jill's Tit
May 20th, 2008

Five bucks says he was high.


Nightrious
May 21st, 2008

Five bucks says I'm high now, the hell is this guy's deal?


alx
May 28th, 2008

Penis envy.